
MANUSCRIPT & SCRIPT ASSESSMENT
EDITING
CREATIVE CONSULTANCY
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This site explains why – and how – you should set about
getting your manuscript in as professionally polished a state as possible,
ideally before it’s submitted to literary agents, publishers
or production companies.
Most of this
information is also available, on request, in printed leaflet form.
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CONTACT
DETAILS
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Robert Lambolle
READING AND RIGHTING
618B Finchley Road
London NW11 7RR
England
tel/fax: (020) 8455 4564
from abroad: +44 20 8455 4564
email: lambhorn@gmail.com
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WHY AN INDEPENDENT
READING?
Trying to get a book published or a script produced can be a frustrating
business. Fledgling writers - even published authors - often find themselves
involved in a lengthy and costly cycle of submissions, rejections and
resubmissions, without becoming much the wiser for their efforts. The
trouble is that literary agents, publishers and producers can seldom
afford time to provide writers with the sort of detailed critical feedback
that they'd find illuminating or constructive.
This is precisely
the service I offer. I will read your typescript and send you a detailed
assessment, based on several years' experience - still ongoing - as
a professional literary agency and publisher's reader/editor, covering
such elements as plot construction, style, characterization, readability,
general presentation and prospects of acceptance. I will usually copy-edit
the first few pages and advise as to your next best step. I can’t
promise to be glowingly enthusiastic about every submission, but my
diagnostic feedback is always honest, realistic and, at the very least,
informative. At best, it can help you solve longstanding creative problems
or produce a major turnaround in the way you write.
Robert
Lambolle’s precise and detailed evaluation of
my early mss. gave me my first big break. He has a merciless
eye for inconsistencies in dialogue and plot, and a
habit of asking awkward but relevant questions which
forced me to refine my writing (not without some resentful
mutterings!) and which still serves me well. He has
provided me with honest, impartial criticism at all
times, and has studied my most bizarre ramblings with
patience and professionalism. I owe him a great debt
of gratitude.
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| JOANNE
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of international bestsellers, Chocolat (shortlisted
for Whitbread Best Novel Prize, filmed by Miramax),
Blackberry Wine, Five Quarters of the Orange and
Coastliners.
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RELATED
SERVICES
What I don't do
is represent writers directly in an agent's capacity. However, favourable
reports may be used as references for future submissions elsewhere.
N.B. My reading/editorial
services are also available to literary agencies, publishers and others
involved in the promotion of good writing.
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TYPES OF
MATERIAL READ
Most types
and genres of writing, including fiction, plays, screenplays and non-fiction
(if not too technically daunting). Specialist interests include the
performing arts, popular culture, psychotherapy, social issues and current
affairs.
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CURRENT
TERMS
Fees vary according to length of
manuscript and likely reading time. Basic rates are:
Standard-length
prose MS (70-75,000 words)
.Add £3 for every extra
1,000 words.
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fewer than 70,000 words, ask for a fee estimate. |
£275 |
| Full-length playscript/screenplay
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£220 |
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A surcharge of 20% applies to single-spaced manuscripts.
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PROCEDURE
- PLEASE READ CAREFULLY
If
you decide to go ahead, please send me:
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Your
typescript (hard copy, not disk or Word.doc),
ideally just as you'd submit it to a literary agent, publisher
or producer, i.e. with clearly legible double-spaced type, ample
margins, pages numbered consecutively in a single sequence, and,
if relevant, page-number-tagged Table of Contents. Remember to
state the total word-count. Pages do not have to be bound. In
case of postal mishap, please don't send your only copy.
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A synopsis
- maximum three pages. |
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A covering letter,
giving brief information about yourself and your submission, e.g.
your current occupation, whether or not it's a first work, prior
submission history if any. |
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A cheque
covering the estimated fee, made out to Robert Lambolle Services. |
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A stamped addressed
jiffy bag or strong envelope for return of manuscript.
Please state if you want it returned by Recorded Delivery, and
cover extra postage costs accordingly. N.B. Only printed stamps
are valid, not instant post office white stickers.
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OPTIONAL: stamped
addressed postcard acknowledging receipt of your manuscript.
This can be done by e-mail, if you prefer. |
If you use
email, and unless otherwise instructed, I'll send you my report as an
attached Word document, though it can't be guaranteed that it will arrive
with all its typographical features intact. Please let me know if you
prefer to receive my report in the form of hard copy.
Please also
state whether you require return of your complete ms. or only the pages
I've annotated.
Clients based
outside the UK, should ask, before submission, for my guidelines on
payment procedure (see Contact Details).
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TURNAROUND
TIME
Assignments
are usually completed within four weeks of your manuscript’s arrival.
Under special circumstances – e.g. unusual pressure of work or
holiday periods – it can take a little longer.

MANUSCRIPT
AND SCRIPT EDITING
Payment
rates for complete manuscript/script editing are higher than those for
evaluation (though evaluation always includes detailed editorial comment).
As I don’t believe in involving clients in needless expense, editing
is usually undertaken only after the work has been fully assessed and
if I feel confident that it stands a fair chance of publication or production.
Exceptions can include (a) mss. that have already been accepted for
publication/production, (b) self-publications, and (c) internet publications.
For editing rates
and introductory Editing Process Guidelines, contact Reading and
Righting (see Contact Details).
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FACE-TO-FACE
CONSULTATION AND MENTORING
It
may be helpful to have a personal discussion about your work. Such sessions
tend to be of most benefit after I’ve had a chance to assess your
writing.
Face-to-face sessions
usually take place in my home-based office in London but I am also willing
to travel (I was once flown to Australia for a one-off session!).
Mentoring, i.e.
ongoing feedback and guidance to work in progress, is also offered.
WORKSHOPS
AND TALKS
I
am available to lead writing workshops and discussions, and to talk
about various aspects of writing, from creative issues to the practicalities
of getting published.
I also run workshops
in writing and performance, improvisation, and performance art.
SPECIALLY
COMMISSIONED WRITING AND CREATIVE EVENT CONSULTATION
I
can undertake special writing assignments (not ghost-writing, however)
and offer input into the overall planning of a wide range of creative
projects and events.
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ABOUT
ROBERT LAMBOLLE
- Literary consultant, editor,
writer, reviewer, teacher and theatre director.
- Established Reading
and Righting independent consultancy in 1985.
- Graduate of University College
London (B.A. Hons) and Bristol University (post-grad, with Distinction).
- Associate of three London literary
agencies.
- Published and broadcast criticism.
Reviewing panel of the Good Book Guide.
- Lecturer in Theatre, Literature
and Film for various British and American colleges.
- Creative Writing and other
Adult Education courses. Open University and BBC Foreign Service.
Guest Speaker at Waterstone’s Middlesex University Writers’
Summer School, Birmingham Professional Writing Foundation, Paris Writers
Workshop.
- Professional theatre, film and
TV experience.
- Titles edited have been published
by Jonathan Cape, Batsford, Random House, Hodder, Constable, Warner,
Coronet, Hutchinson, David & Charles, St. Martin’s Press,
and Little, Brown & Company.
- As literary consultant/editor,
has worked on commissions by writers from all over Britain and Europe,
as well as the U.S.A., Canada, Australia, India, Africa, Japan, Cyprus,
Malta, Brazil, Thailand, Singapore, South Korea and Saudi Arabia.
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CAPTURING
THE ESSENCE
The
job of the reader of fiction is to write reports on
manuscripts, analysing their literary merit, readability
and market potential. 'Good readers don't grow on trees,'
says publisher-turned-agent Jeffrey Simmons. 'Anybody
can read a book and give a literary opinion, but that
is not the same as assessing its saleability.' The report
must capture 'the essence of what a book is like, and
what it fails to be', according to Juliet Burton of
the Laurence Pollinger agency. Freelance reader and
editorial consultant Robert Lambolle
rightly calls it 'a reactive process. I didn't begin
with any principles, but in the course of reading, the
faults started to fall into obvious categories.' Mr.
Lambolle now runs his own independent reading service
and accompanies his reports to authors with advice sheets
detailing common pitfalls to avoid. Like many conscientious
editors, he always tries to say something constructive
- even, in extreme cases, suggesting adult literacy
classes.
from THE DEAR AND GENTLE READER by Danny
Fielder
article in ‘British Book News’,
November 1992
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LINKS
Author.co.uk - www.author.co.uk
Bookwire - www.bookwire.com
The Burry Man - www.burryman.com
Links 01 - click
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